Tuesday, February 25, 2020

The Buzz On Short Story “Homesick”


Re-Released! New Cover!

 I’m happy to announce that my popular science fiction short story romance, “Homesick” has now been re-released! “Homesick” is one those tales that sneak up on you and tug on your heart. There are two very personal connections to this story for me; I’ll get into them in a bit. For now, let’s discuss the inside scoop on “Homesick”.
I wrote “Homesick” because at the time, I actually was, in fact, homesick. More on that later. Once the story was completed, I submitted it to a print publisher of anthologies. “Homesick” was gladly accepted and scheduled to be included in their newest anthology. The only item they wanted changed was the title. So instead of “Homesick”, the story was to be known as “Home Of The Heart.”
Alas, the publisher had to close its doors before the anthology was released. If you’ve been reading my Author Notes blogs, you’ll know this happens A LOT.
So the first thing I did was change the title back to “Homesick”. Next, I looked for a new home for the story. I eventually used it to promote my contemporary romance novel LOVE AT THE TOP released by a now defunct publisher. Here is the beautiful cover:

“Homesick” was voted a Top Ten Finisher Best Science Fiction Short Story in the prestigious Preditors and Editors Readers Poll.

“Homesick” was then published by Uncial Press and had been with them for many years. Here is the original cover.

“Homesick” was very happily received, and given a rating of 1 1/2 hankies out of 2 hankies -- “Unusual for a short story, because it's hard to build that kind of emotion in short stuff. You do it well.”

Here’s the blurb: “Susanne Marie Knight always tells a good tale, whether long or short. Homesick is one of her shorts, but it packs a lot into its almost 6,000 words. Jayna is not a scientist; she's an artist. The only reason she's part of the Mars expedition is because her husband is one of the scientists vital to the team. Lacking the all-consuming passion of satisfying research, she is at loose ends and dreadfully homesick for the soft breezes and gentle green fields of Earth. Mars is harsh, red, and cold. She can't even breathe without a mask. As she paints the stark landscape, she gradually sees its beauty. And then something so incredible, so impossible happens, and she has to adapt to Mars...or die.”
I recently decided to have the rights returned to me for all my Uncial Press books--a total of five novels and three short stories. “Homesick” is the second to be re-released. It’s now available on Amazon.com and Smashwords.com!


New Cover!
Just what is Jayna homesick for?

This book is part of the Fascinating Sci-Fi line.

Here are some wonderful comments:
Homesick is a science fiction that will make you wonder.--Romance at Heart.
Such a beautiful story! Was not prepared for the story or the ending!!!! Wonderfully written!--Reader Comment
I really liked this story. I would definitely like to read more of Susanne’s work.--Reader Comment
Fantastic! Beautifully written! I love the descriptions!--Reader Comment

Now for the connections to real life as I mentioned in the beginning of this blog. Way back when, my husband was stationed on Okinawa, a beautiful island half a world away from where I was from. And yes, at first I was homesick. Looking up at the night sky, I couldn’t get over how strange it was to see different stars, different constellations. This thought led me to the idea on what it would be like looking up at the night sky on a different planet, for example, Mars. The following passage is the beginning of “Homesick” where Jayna describes her reaction to her new home. 
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Jayna stared out at the vast expanse of desert undulating before her. The shifting sands roughly lapped at her booted feet. As she watched, arid winds increased in tempo, whirling the gritty particles into a frenzy. Soon a sandstorm would obscure her vision and she’d have to return to the compound.
Not that she minded. Staying inside the manmade tomb carved into a mountain higher than Mount Everest irritated her, but being outside was infinitely worse. At least inside, ordinary, everyday objects surrounded her. Outside, only the monotonous, pale sand seemed familiar. But instead of reminding her of the home she’d left behind, the sand’s color made her blood boil. She’d expected the stuff to be blood-red.
God, how she hated this place. Even the name of the desert was apt: Hellas. Hell. How true.
Inhaling a deep breath of the purified oxygen-nitrogen mixture from the tank strapped to her shoulders, she took one last look at the velvet skies pierced by intense, untwinkling points of light. Two tiny moons hung low on the horizon. Two. If she lived to be one hundred, she’d never get used to that unnatural sight.
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The second connection shows how Jayna has adapted to this new home, and also has new life growing inside her. Her miracle baby, she calls her unborn child. I, too, called my daughter my miracle baby. Below shows how Jayna feels about her new circumstances.
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Sitting cross-legged at the base of the Hellas mountain she now called home, Jayna took a break from her painting and gazed out at the desolate beauty surrounding her. The shrunken sun had warmed the thin Martian atmosphere to forty degrees Fahrenheit, a veritable heat wave. High overhead, the two moons, small Phobos and tiny Deimos, shone down on her, keeping her company. Soon the larger one, Phobos, would complete its circuit across the sky and vanish for a few hours. How strange that the moons appeared to move in opposite directions. But Phobos would be back. She and Deimos could count on that.
Funny how two moons instead of one now seemed so natural and right. She smiled. Yes, a lot had changed in two months.
Her half-finished canvas propped up in front of her, she picked up an oil tube of ultramarine blue and squeezed some next to the viridian green on her palette. Springtime on Mars was beautiful, a cause for celebration. The nearby Mare Serpentis, once believed to be an ocean, was instead awash with hardy desert plants: mosses and lichens to decorate the Spartan landscape. New life, new growth abounded, just as it did within her.
She patted her generous tummy. Who would’ve guessed she had something in common with this forbidding planet? As the seed within her took hold, so did the tenacious desert plants. Each new life struggled against the odds to survive hostile conditions. Mother Nature’s miracle. Her miracle.
When she lifted a brush to the canvas, a gentle fluttering in her stomach stayed her hand. “You’re letting your presence be known, aren’t you, little one?”
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I hope you enjoy Jayna’s wondrous story.

Happy reading,

Susanne Marie Knight
Read outside the box: award-winning Romance Writing With A Twist!


Monday, February 3, 2020

The Buzz on Short Story “Family Secrets”

Re-Released! New Cover!

I’m happy to announce that my popular short story romance, “Family Secrets” has now been re-released! I wrote this popular paranormal (or is it a paranormal?!) when I received a call from my publisher to submit a short story. The genre was open; the storyline was up to me. I decided on a contemporary romance with a touch of magic... just like the touch of magic that I included in my Regency romance, THE MAGIC TOKEN, that will also soon be re-released. I liked the idea of a tie-in to this Regency... not that there is a magic token, but that a love ritual was performed on Midsummer’s Eve back in 1802, and now, in contemporary times with Talia Fanetti. More on this below in my connections to real life section!
Here’s the blurb:
Talia Fanetti longs for true love. She’s just gotten engaged to eligible bachelor Edmund Bartholomew, so she’s all set in the love department.
Or is she?
On a romantic getaway in the country, she learns her future in-laws live in a house awash with secrets. Talia soon makes a startling discovery: she has a secret as well. When Grandmother Bartholomew offers Talia a chance to find out who her true love is, will Talia have the courage to use the magic spell?
I also loved the idea that every character had something hidden from the others. After all, what family doesn’t have secrets? It was fun considering each and every person and then deciding what the mysterious secret would be.
“Family Secrets” was published by Uncial Press and had been with them for many years. Here is the original cover.

I recently decided to have the rights returned to me for all my Uncial Press books--a total of five novels and three short stories. “Family Secrets” is the first to be re-released. It’s now available on Amazon.com and Smashwords.com!


Here are some fabulous reviews:

“Family Secrets”--The characters were intriguing... If you want a quick, sweet romantic read with a touch of magic, you will enjoy this story.--Got Romance Reviews.
A quick read but I enjoyed it. Good characters.--Reader Review
“Family Secrets” is a little gem.--UP Review

This book is part of the Uncanny Paranormals and Contemporary lines.




Real-Life Tidbit: Back in Junior High (or Middle School as it would now be called) a very good friend knew of my interest in paranormal subjects so she gave me a little fortune telling book. This book also contained a few charms and ceremonies. In “Family Secrets” I based Granny’s book, THE SAGE SEER, on my friend’s gift--THE LADIES’ ORACLE--which was supposedly first publishing in the sixteenth century. I slightly altered the Midsummer’s Eve ritual for both “Family Secrets” and THE MAGIC TOKEN but the end result was the same: to see one’s future husband.

Here’s a snippet from “Family Secrets”:

Talia sat near the edge of the stream, close enough to peer into the dark water. The moon seemed to shine a beacon right where she needed it. She could see her pale image within the water below.
If this secret ritual was successful, her image would be replaced by her true love's reflection.
Her heart beat faster. Would the magic work?
Only one way to find out. She adjusted her shawl around her shoulders, then got to work. Putting down her supplies, she dug a hole in the dirt just large enough to make sure the candle would remain upright.
She looked at her watch. It was time.
Swiftly striking the match, she smiled as the flame blazed into life. Then she lit the candle. Next, she picked up the apple in one hand and the rose in the other. With the rose, she made clockwise circles around the apple. She did that as instructed--seven times.
By the time she'd finished, her hand shook. She set down the rose and picked up the candle. Bathed in the flicker of its light, she took a bite out of the apple. One bite was all that was needed.
Now for the moment of truth. Tensing up and holding her breath, she leaned over the riverbank to gaze into the water below.
Her large dark eyes blinked back at her. Her hair, mussed by the wind, looked as wild as a lion's mane against the white of her nightshirt.
She released her pent-up breath. Unless she was her own true love, no other image reflected back at her.
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I hope you enjoy Talia’s true love story.

Happy reading,

Susanne Marie Knight
Read outside the box: award-winning Romance Writing With A Twist!